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aniya lyons's avatar

oh, I really loved this, truly. thanks for sharing

Simran Sharma's avatar

his is such a beautifully written piece. The imagery of gray turning into color captures so well the transition from merely existing to truly living. I found myself reflecting on the moments in my own life when joy felt distant, and how finding connection slowly brought color back into the world. Thank you for sharing this.

deerswanlie.'s avatar

Aww thank youu 🫶🏾 it makes my heart happy that you connected with this. Maybe we’re all just waiting for that moment when life switches back into color.

Una Rouquine's avatar

« And living felt like a wound —

as if the sorrows of others

were poured into me like ink

until they walked away lighter,

leaving me heavy with their shadows. ». Powerful, impactful, and so deeply touching. The whole piece was an exquisite read to me, the french added a special touch to it, a certain sweetness to the whole text. This was so beautifully written👏💗🤌

deerswanlie.'s avatar

Thankk youu so muchh <3. I poured my heart out writing this so it makes me happy that you say that 😆

Una Rouquine's avatar

Your welcome ! I truly loved reading it✨

jon johnson's avatar

I bloom, i rise, i live… a perfect ending. Thank you for sharing this.

deerswanlie.'s avatar

Thank youu for reading thiss. I truly appreciate it 💕🌷

jessica's avatar

this felt like was a HYMN!!!!! i am a pulse, a flame, a voice. that finally belongs to myself.

i bloom i rise. like YES!!!!!!

deerswanlie.'s avatar

Hahaha yess thankk youu 💕Honestly, writing all this felt hard at first but once I knew what message I wanted to convey, words started spilling out of me. I'm so glad you liked it too!! It brings me alot of joy.

Anoohya's avatar

This was beautiful♥️

deerswanlie.'s avatar

Thank youuu! I'm glad you enjoyed itt🫶🏾

deerswanlie.'s avatar

Thankk youu for reading 💕i appreciate it